Saturday, January 26, 2013

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Pretty Wool Coat
            In the far-far away land, there was a poor man, called Mr.Pineapple. He lived by himself  in his house because his wife had passed away, her wife died when an earthquake shaked the village five years ago. Mr.Pineapple had a short-black body with brown hair which always messed, he never combed his hair. Mr.Pineapple lived in his small wooden house beside the Oak wood next to a big house in the village, that house was Mr.Rashberry’s the richest man in the village. Mr.Pineapple was a simple man and always smiled to everyone, he made the equipment from wood and sell it in the village market.
            Someday, he was invited by his neighbor that made him little surprised. He  was invited by Mr.Rashberry to his birthday, in a hurry he  get his old coat and then walked down to the street to Mr.Rashberry’s house. He was surprised of the house, in front of him  because there were many beautyfulness arround the house. It showed the coloured lamps, flowers, baloons, ribbons, foods and music. Mr.Pineapple stuck in front of the door  and surprised of this party, he so wondered at Mr.Rashberry’s house.
            No long to wait, Mr.Rashberry came and looked at Mr.Ppineapple. “ are you sure Mr.Good guy? ”,asked Mr.Rashberry to Mr.Pineapple. “Mm..yes i’m sure sir,you invited me to this party”.answered Mr.Pineapple.” yes,,I did, but look at yourself ” “ you had a wrong clothes, lookk at the other men “,said Mr.Rashberry. Suddenly Mrs.Rashberry came and asking to her husband,”honey..who is that? Do you know him?”,asked Mrs.Rashberry. “I’m not sure honey “.answred Mr.Rashberry, Then they were laughing. “You are right sir, but I will be right back and you will know me”.said Mr.Pineapple stepped outside the house.
            Inside his house, Mr.Pineapple was busy to find the best clothes for the party. He finally found a wool coat which his wife’s coat, it made from soft wool and sewed in to smooth shape.It coloured in a brown and thin leather in the left-side hands. He was look so elegant on that coat, he looked so young than really he was. When he reached Mr.Rashberry’s house, everyone were looking at him and looked so amazed by his coming.
            Mr.Pineapple smiled and greeted everyone inside the house,he looked back when Mr.Rashberry came and path his back. ”Mr.Pineapple the nice coat,how is life today?”,asked Mr.Rashberry. ”Oh..everything still great today sir,,”,answered Mr.Pineapple. “come on get inside and  enjoy the party,well everyone this is my special guest..”,Mr. Rashberry showed his guest proudly. ”Hello..sir..”, “Hello sir..what a nice coat tonight..”,Mr.Blacapple  greeted him. “come on join the party , what do you want? Lamb?Wine?Pie?”,asked Mr.Blackapple. “yeah..actually I just wanna a piece of pie for my dog”.Mr.Pineapple replied. ”what?for your dog?”,Mr Blackapple was surprised of Mr.Pineapple said,he called Mr.Rashberry and he came to them,asking “what happen?is any problem with my party?”,asked Mr.Berry.
“no,,but look at him,he came here just for a piece of pie forhis dog,is it right?”,Mr.Apple was looked angry.
Mr.Pineapple was smiling to them and say,”well gentlemen..thank you so much had invited me to this great party, i don’t mean to unrespect your invitationMr.Rashberry,i jus don’t feel deserved to be here.when first time I came here with my old coat, you refused me.Now i wearing my beatiful coat, and you welcome me. So mmy question is,who was invited? Me or my coat?”,Mr.pineapple asked.
Everyone inside the hoouse was whispering each other.Both of Mr.Rashberry or Mr.Blackapple did not answered his question,they keep quite and no one spoke up to Mr.Pineapple. “Well,,no body answer me,i will leave now..thank you for inviting me gentlemen”.Finally he left his coat on the chair and get outside the party. All the guest looked at Mr.Rashberry and wondering with the other,why he chose the guest based from the cover.

           

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